Showing posts with label The Scheming Miss Sinclair. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Scheming Miss Sinclair. Show all posts

Sunday, September 16, 2012

6 SENTENCE SUNDAY--September 16

Today's six sentences are from The Scheming Miss Sinclair, a Regency spanking story.  The hero, Lord Reece has just been tricked into compromising Miss Lucy Sinclair and so being forced to propose to her.  His grandmother offers him a little advice:


            "I believe you and the Sinclair girl can be happy together.  Give her a spanking if you think she needs to be punished for her naughty behavior, then go on and make a life together.”
            “Spank Miss Sinclair?” Lord Reece asked.  Spanking his sister for her part in Miss Sinclair’s scheme hadn’t given him a moment’s pause.  He was used to disciplining Ellen and the rest of his brothers and sisters.  But Miss Sinclair?
 
Lord Reece's grandmother goes on to tell him that she believes he'll find spanking his new bride quite a bit different from spanking his sister.  And he most definitely does.
 

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Thursday, September 13, 2012

TOO MUCH SPANKING?

Recently I got this review for my story The Scheming Miss Sinclair:

"i really like a story where the husband has to discipline his wife for bratty behavior but this was a little to over the top. yes she did trick him to have to marry her but she loved him and wanted to be a good wife to him and she did deserve punishment but the last punishment really was cruel and undeserved."

I reread the ending, and I could see where this comment came from.  It got me thinking.

I'm someone who goes for a happy ending in pretty much every story I write, including Miss Sinclair.  But is there a point where the hero has been so harsh that a happy ending is impossible?  Is there a place where there's no going back to romantic feelings? 

One of the reasons that I often switch back and forth between the male and female point of view is that I think it can help in situations where the hero might be coming off as, if not cruel, then unfeeling, because it can show that he cares deeply about the heroine.  And when I move into the heroine's point of view, it can show thoughts and feelings, especially about being spanked, that she isn't ready to share with the hero.

Are there stories that have stopped working for you because the punishment didn't feel as if it fit the crime or because you felt like the hero was way out of line?







Sunday, August 19, 2012

THE SCHEMING MISS SINCLAIR

I just published new novella, The Scheming Miss Sinclair.  Here's the scoop:


Miss Lucy Sinclair is used to getting everything she desires, and what she desires most is marriage to Lord Reece.  Although she has received three proposals since her come out, although her drawing room is filled with flowers from admirers, although she's been deemed a diamond of the first water by the ton gentlemen, she has been unable to attract the attention of the earl.

So Miss Sinclair does what she does best--she concocts a scheme, a scheme that thoroughly ruins her reputation and compels Lord Reece to wed her.

She is shocked when the earl turns out to be a different sort of man than she supposed.  With the ring scarcely on her finger, the earl marches her to his study and orders her to bend over his desk for a spanking as punishment for forcing him into marriage.  When she refuses, he simply takes her over his knee, bares her bottom and spanks her until she obediently stretches out over his desk and submits to a spanking with his hairbrush.

It seems the earl has decided that, as he's had no choice but to marry the scheming Miss Sinclair, he is going to train her to become an obedient and docile wife.  His methods involve applying his hand, his hairbrush, a willow switch, and a crop to his bride's lovely behind, while offering her tantalizing tastes of the pleasures a husband can bring to the body of a wife if she behaves.

This novella is 28,341 words long.  It is intended for readers over the age of 18.




And here's a glimpse of how Lord Reece's training progresses:

      Gareth awoke the next morning with an overwhelming sense of well-being.  He rolled over, and if sensing his gaze, Lucy’s eyelids fluttered open.  Still half asleep, she smiled at him.  How could he do anything but smile back?
     “Do you suppose we should attempt to wear clothes today?” he asked her.  “Or shall we just retreat to our chamber during the servants’ brief appearances and stay naked as we did yesterday?”  A truly glorious day.  With no attempts to escape, no insolence or disobedience, and so no spankings, paddlings, or whippings. Instead, bouts of sex and more laughter than he’d imagined occurred in a marriage.
     Don’t cozen yourself, he thought.  One delightful, truly glorious day does not mean you possess the ideal wife by any means.  He must continue her education in obedience.  Hmm, perhaps a preventative spanking was in order.  His youngest brother, Jacob, had benefited from them. Punishing Jacob after misbehavior had never been as effective as sending him off to a night of potential misdeeds at his club, for instance, with reddened rear as a small reminder of what he could expect if he came home having lost his monthly allowance playing hazard or some such.  A preventative spanking was not particularly harsh, and administering one at unexpected times should keep Lucy on her toes and behaving as she should.
       He leaned over and kissed her.  Then he tossed back the coverlet, slid up until his back was resting against the headboard, his legs stretched out in front of him.  They were both still nude, so he need not even lift her skirts, not that it was a chore he minded.
     “Come put yourself over my knee,” he told her, allowing just a hint of sternness in his voice, so she would realize it wasn’t a request.
     “What?  I— Why?” Lucy asked.  “I’ve done nothing.”
     He’d been correct.  If Lucy had been properly trained, she would not have questioned him.  She’d already be over his lap.  “I disagree.  With those words you’ve earned a spanking in addition to the one I had planned.”
     “But why did you have one planned?”  A pout had appeared on her pretty face.  “I pleased you in every way I knew how yesterday.”
     “Missy, unless you want a third spanking, I advise you to get into position immediately,” Gareth warned, his temper igniting.  She was a spoilt thing, unused to doing anything but exactly as she pleased.
     With a mighty sigh, Lucy flopped across his lap.  She twisted around and stared at him over her shoulder.  “You enjoy this.  Don’t think I can’t feel your cock pressing against my belly.”
     “The sigh alone would have gotten you your third spanking,” Gareth answered.  “Those words simply made your insolence and disrespect more pronounced.”
     Splaying his fingers to give the spanks extra sting, Gareth got to work on Lucy’s bottom, ignoring the fact that, as she’d said, his cock was pressing against her belly as if the spanking had been designed for its pleasure.  When he’d turned her entire bottom and the tops of her thighs red, he paused, his hand firmly planted on her fanny.  “Tell me why you’re being punished,” he snapped.
     “Let me consider,” she drawled.  He raised his palm and gave her a sharp spank in retaliation.  It didn’t change her attitude.  “I was to receive one for absolutely nothing, one for presuming to inquire why I was to be punished when I had done nothing, one for sighing, or was it for daring to note that your cock was hard indicating spanking me is not at all onerous to you?”
     “You have earned yet another for your continuing disrespect,” Gareth said.  “Perhaps this should be another unclothed day, since your skirts would be all but constantly up around your waist if you were to wear them.  Let’s say this is the first of the three for disrespect.   We’ll work our way back to the one—the only one—I had planned for you this morning.  Which was simply to reinforce the notion that you’re to follow my orders immediately and without protest or question.”
     “A test then,” Lucy said.
     “No, continued education in obedience.  Your response certainly proved I was right in my belief that you need more training,” he explained.
     “Training.  As if I’m an animal?” she cried.
     “Training as if you’re a spoilt child, which you are,” Gareth answered.  “If you’d prefer the idea of an animal though, I shall cooperate and give you one of the spankings with a riding crop.  Now, again, tell me why you are being punished.”
     “I am being punished for a lack of respect, my lord,” she told him, her voice tight with what he believed was repressed anger.  Still, he found the reply acceptable.
     “That is correct.”  He chose a spot on the right cheek of her bottom and spanked it repeatedly and relentlessly until it was at least two shades darker than the rest of her punished behind and she was squirming over his lap.  Then he moved his hand up to a spot just above the one he’d selected and spanked it into a matching shade of crimson.  He worked methodically, ignoring her tears when they came, until her entire bottom was had been so disciplined. 
     “Get up,” he ordered.  He stood when she did, then took her by the arm and marched down the hall to the chamber that his eldest sister usually occupied when she was in residence.  He marched her directly to the tall pier glass, a lovely piece with a bucolic scene on the panel across the top.  He spun Lucy around so her back was to it, then took her chin in one hand, and forced her to turn her head and look into the glass.
     “Make a study of your bottom, young lady.  Are you not mortified that you, old enough to be a mother yourself, had to be spanked until your rear is such a shade?  Are you not ashamed that you have not the womanly virtue to obey your husband willingly?  I am certainly ashamed to have such a spoilt, undisciplined, rude girl as a wife.”
     Lucy wiped away her tears with the back of her palms.  “I apologize for my behavior, my lord,” she said, her voice devoid of emotion.  “I am most ashamed.”
     He found he did not believe her, but it was a feeling based on nothing he could put his finger on.  He did not feel that he could sentence her to yet another spanking, not at this time.  She still had three more to come.
     Gareth opened the dresser and found a hairbrush.  The back, made of a pale beech wood, wasn’t quite as wide or heavy as that of his own, but it would suit.  He wrapped his hand around Lucy’s upper arm and took her over to the bed. 

You can find the novel at Amazon and Amazon UK andBarnes & Noble


Just for fun, here's what I was picturing for that mirror

And here's what I was thinking of for that brush

Saturday, August 18, 2012

HAPPILY EVER AFTER

I just finished writing a new Regency spanking story (now on to proofreading!), The Scheming Miss Sinclair.  In the course of three days, the heroine, Lucy, receives four hand spankings (all on a bare bottom, one on a bare, wet bottom), two hairbrush spankings, a whipping with a willow switch, and a whipping with a crop.

Her new husband, Lord Reece, is very angry with her.  (I'm sure you must have surmised she'd made someone angry.)  It's my opinion that he has every right to be furious with her.  Lucy concocted a scheme to be found alone with Lord Reece at a ball, intentionally ruining herself, so he would be forced to marry her, something he had no desire to do. 

And yet, by the end of the three days, three days!, even with all that punishment, even with starting out their marriage in such a manner, Lucy and Lord Reece are in love.

I thought about all the other stories I've written, and realized I always go for a happy ending, usually with the characters in love, although a few just have them on friendly terms.  I pretty much always have a sensual aspect to the spankings too, not in every spanking I describe, but usually in a story, the characters get to the point where there is pleasure mixed in with at least some of the discipline.

A happily-ever-after ending just makes me happy, whether I'm reading a spanking story or writing one.